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Tuesday, May 21, 2013

Really, Advertisers?

Another blog written in Minnesota: I didn't plan to talk about television advertising again, but I saw yet another commercial that has me irritated over the portrayal of women. My college major was advertising and I understand why women are used in ads for products aimed at men. The problem is how women are portrayed.
The latest example is a commercial for Armor All. A man comes out in a bathrobe because he hears noises in his garage. A Viking-like male is in there and he's holding a box of Armor All products. The first man admits that the product was a gift from his brother and the Viking guy says he doesn't deserve it or the car (that's covered in dirt). So far, it's fine.
Then comes the part that I didn't like: a scantily clad woman prances out (and I use the word prances deliberately), looks at the guy she's sleeping with, looks at the Viking, and as the Viking leaves, she prances after him.
Really? Really Armor All? Women are so brainless and fickle that they'll follow some strange man dressed up like a Viking because he's got a clean car?
The number one offender in my opinion is Axe personal care products for men. They're the ones who had a commercial where a man was portrayed as his hair style and the woman as a pair of breasts. That was downright offensive.
Their latest campaign for their Apollo line features a woman in jeopardy (fire, shark attack). She's rescued by a man (firefighter, lifeguard) and instead of thanking him, she spots a man who uses Apollo products and brushes past the man who saved her because Women love astronauts.
I don't have a problem with the saving part; I consider that a legitimate ploy for the ads. What bothers me is the subtle message being transmitted by the way the women are portrayed. It's not just Axe. It's not just Armor All. It's a message being sent in a number of ads to young men and women who watch television and it's not a positive message.
I'm not naïve. I know women have been portrayed as objects in advertising for a long time, but there's something different about the current trend. It's not just that it's 2013 and we should be beyond this—although one would hope we, as a society, would have grown up a bit more than we have—it's the idea that women are that brainless. I hate using the same word over and over, but it fits the scenario. They're like Stepford women, nothing more than robots to satisfy males.
When I was in advertising ethics class in college, we looked at using sex (and women) to sell products. We examined print ads, which granted are different than television commercials, but I think it will sort of illustrate the difference in how women were used back then as compared to how they're used now. (Heavy emphasis on the word used.)
The one ad that really sticks in my memory was for liquor. We see a man and a woman alone in an upscale living room. He's in a suit, she's wearing a black dress that's sexy, but wasn't so revealing that a woman in real life wouldn't wear it out for an evening with her guy. The models are sharing a drink and a suggestive look. In the corner of the ad was a bottle of the liquor being advertised and a glass with ice cubes. The ice cubes definitely had a phallic arrangement, but that would be something picked up subliminally. Most people wouldn't look at a print ad long enough to notice it consciously.
In the liquor ad, the couple are portrayed as equals. They're both interested in each other—it's a choice they're both making.
In the TV ads today, women are not equals. Women aren't even portrayed as people in the Armor All and Axe commercials. Women are merely objects for the man to take or not take as he wishes.
I've been trying and trying to remember if this brainless, Stepford portrayal of women has been around and I just hadn't paid attention, but I don't think so. I tend to study ads and notice nuances and trends because I got used to doing this while I was in school. This seems to have popped up within the last five years or so and it doesn't seem to be abating, not when the Armor All commercial really didn't need a woman in it at all to get the message across, but they put one in anyway.
Why do I think this is happening? Leaving the larger societal issues for the professionals, I'll speculate that it's laziness on the part of the advertising community. Sex sells, but instead of being subtle about it—which takes some time and cleverness on the part of the copywriters—let's just throw it out there because that's easier.
This lack of subtlety is something I've seen across a broad swath of commercials, not only the portrayal of women as sex objects. Ads have hooks. When I was trained, the copywriter tried to camouflage the hook with a carefully wrapped worm. Now, the ads like maybe try to yank a worm on the hook, but don't do a very good job with that. In fact, I've wondered for a while if viewers don't notice the tactics advertisers are using to reel them in or if the advertisers just don't care if their target market sees their hook.
Whatever the reason, though, this portrayal of women needs to change. There's a big, big difference between using a woman's sex appeal to sell products to men and objectifying women so that they're nothing except sexy brainless robots. I've had enough of the Stepford women.


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Sunday, May 19, 2013

Ring of Fire Solar Eclipse Australia 2013
This video shows three different views of the Australian annular eclipse that just happened this month.


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Thursday, May 16, 2013

Experimenting With Synopses

Another blog written in Minnesota: Writing synopses are never fun. Well, at least not for me. Maybe some anal plotter type enjoys them, but I find them torturous. While I was up in Minnesota, working on my house, I spent some time trying to come up with a five-page synopsis for my Work In Progress (WIP). I met with failure after failure.
Multiple tries for me on a synopsis is par for the course, but I was doing a particularly bad job with this story. We're talking world champion horrible. Something clearly needed to be done differently.
To get my head straight, I started listing the plot points I felt needed to be mentioned in the synopsis, and as I'm making this list, it dawned on me that I could do this for my hero's growth arc—it's his book since he's doing the major changing—my heroine's smaller growth arc, and the romance.
Four lists with the items all in bullet points. Now all I had to do was blend them together into one cohesive synopsis.
I started on that the same day I finished the final list and it helped. A lot. I came in at six pages, not five, but it's much more concise without a lot of unnecessary information thrown in. This was one of my primary problems with the earlier versions—lots and lots of extraneous detail.
This method actually proved helpful. I'm probably going to try it again the next time I have to torture myself by writing one.


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Tuesday, May 14, 2013

Life Without Internet

Another blog written in Minnesota: It's really kind of amazing how dependent I am on the internet. I've jokingly called it Life Support, but it's become such a part of everyday life. I don't have internet while I'm in Minnesota. My parents don't need it and I gave it up when I moved to Atlanta. None of my neighbors were kind enough to leave their networks unsecured.
One of the things I need to do while I'm home is get my taxes done. I thought I'd copied all the information I needed to my computer only to discover I'd forgotten all about the information I had saved on my online email account. Oops.
Today I was getting my hair cut and I used the time at the salon to get that information written down. I didn't have time, though, to do everything else I needed to do and that was so frustrating. And with so much to do on my house, it's not like I can park my butt there and keep using it until I finished.
The other thing that's frustrating is I need to buy a few things for the house—namely new curtains for my bedroom and some new towels to put out in the master bathroom. I shop online all the time. I hate real, go-to-the-store shopping unless I have no other choice. I didn't have time to look at curtains or towels online either. Now I either have to bite the bullet and go to a store or hope the tax guy will let me use his wifi.
It's kind of amazing to realize that in 1999, I was one of the first people I knew to hop online. I remember how frustrated I was over how few businesses—no matter how big they were—had a web presence. I got coffee mugs from Amazon every year in the beginning because I was a good online customer. Among the earliest.
I'm feeling so cutoff right now. I think I need internet anonymous.


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Sunday, May 12, 2013

Two Spocks
I thought this was cute.


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