I wrote 4 pages in chapter 3 yesterday (that's my goal while I'm on deadline, 4 pages a day, but more is better). And it looks as if this change in POV is going to work. The scene is more interesting in Conor's eyes and there are other things happening that go beyond the attraction between them. I just have to go back and layer them in because the plot stuff is not what poor Conor is focused on. :-) I wonder how long he can resist?
Now I need to get a few things done and start writing some more. Goal is to finish all of chapter 3 by tomorrow night. With a little luck, I'll start 4, but for sure 3 has to be done.
